Tuesday 3 November 2009

The Story

  • On the roof tope the hero GAZE runs at the camera the lights from the street below shine up and fireworks flash in the sky. GAZE runs right up to the camera and over it.
  • On the carnival street it is full of bazaar dancing people all in masks. GAZE jumps to the ground and we see him for the first time, he has a mask that covers his eyes. He looks up and he moves into the crowd. A masked man in the foreground covers the camera wiping to the next shot.
  • GAZE moves deeper into the carnival party where a flag wire moves into separating the view slightly to the left of the screen. On the right GAZE dances his way down moving past other masked dancers. On the left LIPS the heroine dances in her clown outfit. She has a mask that also covers her eyes. As GAZE moves down on the right a woman starts to dance with him, he pulls her in with a grin but once she is all over him he grows board and pushes her away and walks on. On the left side, that has now fills half the screen, LIPS is dancing, but the masked men around give her little notice in her clown outfit.
  • GAZE dances on through the crowd looking at the masked people around him. LIPS looks about with a bit of anger then she twist around and rips her clown outfit off, to show a sexy belly dancer outfit. The masked men turn to look at her from all around as she starts dancing again.
  • The masked men move in on LIPS surrounding her, led by TAT the lustful villain a masked man in a baggy jester outfit, LIPS becomes lost in the dance. GAZE dances on but is stopped by two more women interested in him, he gives them a good look as they come on to him. Lips is being smothered by the men as they grope her, she becomes more lost in the madness of it all. GAZE pushes free from the masked women and moves away heading for the camera.
  • On both sides of the split screen the crowd reach out for LIPS and GAZE, overwhelming the two. They both push free to the centre of the screen. The flag wire that split the screen snaps and strong spot lights flick on as the two cross paths and stop in a pose. They stair at one another in a moment of stillness.
  • GAZE whips around into a romantic dance pose in the square. Other people are dancing around them as they hold their pose for a moment then they join in. GAZE and LIPS have the most enthusiasm, LIPS with her sexy and provocative style and GAZE with his stern and powerful stance. We see the masked crowd and the lit square.
  • GAZE tries to get intermit with her by stroking her face and coming in for a kiss. He is pushed away by LIPS when getting to close shocked at first, but he jumps right back into the romantic moment of the dance.
  • TAT watching from the crowd, he is jealous grits his teeth with a slouched back. A couple pass in front of him and he disappears.
  • Back with the two dancing romantically, suddenly the crowd shuffles GAZE and is pulled into the dancing crowd. A man picks LIPS up by the waist and she is carried away and looks back at GAZE confused. He reaches his hand out grabbing at air.
  • The screen splits again on the right LIPS is passed around by the masked crowd, pulling and pushing her to them. Everyone seems to want a piece of LIPS and she becomes disoriented. On the lift GAZE has a woman all over him, he looks about the crowd for LIPS, trying to force her off.
  • LIPS falls to her knees dazed and confused masked people surround her in madness of the carnival. GAZE pulls the masked people around to look at them but can’t tell LIPS out of the crowd. TAT moves in and picks the dazed LIPS from the ground. Women hold onto GAZE as he moves through the thick crowd, in his frantic search for LIPS. TAT takes LIPS away to the roof tops. GAZE search becomes a bit more violent as he pulls people around in hopes of finding LIPS.
  • TAT lays LIPS against a chimney. On the side of the chimney its shadow sows GAZE as he looks through the crowd for LIPS. On the roof TAT looms over the dazed intoxicated LIPS and forces himself on her groping and licking. LIPS suddenly comes to her senses and pushes TAT off and runs over the rooftops.
  • GAZE stumbling forward holding his head on the street as he loses all hope of finding LIPS. We can see to silhouettes on the roofs in chase. GAZE looks up and sees them on the roof he runs off. GAZE’s silhouette climes up the side of the building and at the same time the silhouette of TAT chasing LIPS are on the rooftop.
  • LIPS’s skirt is torn by TAT’s hand and she stumbles over. She slips down the roof, but crawls to the roof end and pulls her self up, TAT carefully follows. A roof tile gives way and falls off the side.
  • The tile smashes on the ground with a worms eye view.
  • LIPS turns with a fearing look on her face holding onto the roof, she tenses up and breathes heavy. At the far end of the roof past TAT, GAZE climes onto the roof and looks over to LIPS. He starts to make his way over.
  • LIPS inches back, TAT closes in, suddenly LIPS looks over to a flag wire and jumps from the roof to hang from it. TAT jumps to grab her with anger. The tiles under his feet slip, he stumbles off the side.
  • LIPS cringes looking away from the falling TAT, she looks to the left and sees the flag wire is splitting. Her face becomes full of fear again. LIPS falls slowly as the flag wire snaps, suddenly GAZE pushing from the roof jumping off. GAZE grabs LIPS and the flag wire, LIPS is shocked and relieved holding onto GAZE’s neck. The two slowly move through the air. The two swing down twisting around the central flag pole with the flag wire, to the raised platform it stands on.
  • GAZE jumps and lands on the platform the two of them looking shocked, below there is dancing and partying. GAZE holds LIPS in his arms as they look at each another. They come in for a kiss in a romantic pose. The Curtains start to close. GAZE feels up LIPS’s leg and the curtains fully close and credits role to a slap sound.

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